Attack of the Clockwork Army

The setting for this story was very unique among Choice Games and created interesting conflicts between pro-British and Rebel characters. Unfortunately, these weren't played out particularly effectively once revealed. Many of the choices seemed false, as if the author knew what they wanted to happen and forced it regardless of the player's choice in various scenarios. This left me feeling frustrated on several occasions and took me completely out of the story.

What a loose and scatter brained read this is. The story it's self had potential. The poor character development, among other issues, as well as the execution the story and the readers choices was nothing less than a pointless time killing chore for this reader. Save your cash.

Short abrupt all endings similar, not there best game

Bad transition and has a lot of space to improve the setting of the story. I just found myself bored by it. Nothing stimulating enough to keep me going. Maybe someday I'll finish it and see if my view is still the same.

Pros: 1) The unique steampunk Australian setting provided a nice change of pace from other Hosted Games which generally take place in America or a high fantasy realm. I enjoyed the whole magical metal thing! 2) The writing is very strong. The author vividly describes characters, locations and actions and maintains a consistent tone throughout the story. 3) The main character is not all-powerful! This raises the tension during the various action scenes. My Wish: I would have enjoyed more discussion and analysis of why our character should sympathize with the Brits or the colonists. Overall, a very well-written and enjoyable read!

There just isn't any substance here, the romance was rushed and done in one step, the setting wasn't well explained and I couldn't make sense of it, and the story was incredibly short, and when I mean short, I mean god awful. I was done in 15 minutes, and I didn't even figure out what was going on, and no skill was required. Skip this one at all costs.

This has to be the worst or very near to it. The most boring story. The weird world it is set in succeeds at making no sense and remain unappealing at the same time.