Forgotten: D&D style text RPG

I’ve found some bugs u might want to fix, some bigger some less important. The less important ones are some broken dialogs, i’ve only found 1 though dk of there are more. It’s an aust dialogue towards the end, last chapter or the one before it (i don’t remember it). Second one much more important are the finales achievements, i’ve already finished the story twice and i’ve gave the crown away + marched on fort whale neither of the achievements have been given to me (dk if i have to save someone in particular or i have to succeed the flight)

I really enjoy this game. I don’t mind paying the $3 to unlock the rest of the chapters but the grammar and spelling are atrocious. Makes it hard to fully understand everything at some points in the game. Also while the game boasts being a choose your own adventure style game it follows one linear path and the choices mainly are just for little side events. It still makes for a great game with a lot of replayability. The characters are interesting and the story flows nicely.

Really enjoyable adventure but the editing gets a little sloppy after chapter two. Good content. Tempted to run this adventure for my D&D table

The game has a lot of potential but comes up too short to justify paying anything to continue. It has far to many spelling errors. The story seems good but the ability to “choose” doesn’t actually happen often. There were multiple times I would not have done what I was forced to. It makes the story limited and seems more like reading a choose your own adventure book where the desired outcome only happens when you choose correctly. If you choose poorly you start over and just choose differently. Your rolls don’t a seem to matter as you replay it goes the same path based on choices not roll outcomes. No real replay ability.

Whoever wrote this has zero concept on how to write decently, its AI art so that already ruins it, and then this dev does the same thing these other shady devs do which is hide the fact you have to pay for it, in a wall of text right at the bottom.

For a DnD style text adventure there is a rather high lack of “options” for what you want to do, I only did the free chapters and I had very limited options for how to proceed. The reason I say this is because it literally says “choose your fate” can’t really do that with so few choices. My other major complaint is the absolutely abysmal grammar inside the chapters. It has potential, but definitely needs work and a proof reader.

Two “chapters” that last 2 minutes each then you must buy further chapters, the story is a straight line, there is no character creation of any kind and the dice rolls are backwards. We have AI now and they don’t even care enough to use it to add content. These devs are blantant scam artists, all they want to do is rob consumers.

It’s a good read but it does still have some grammatical errors. That being said it is not a big deal since they are few and far between. If you have the money to spare I would definitely recommend buying the whole story.

The game is well designed and fun.

Typically I hate game that are play to progress because we (free players) never get to see the full beauty. With one chapter down though I am considering paying to unlock the second. I would like to see what roll is needed for the skill checks and I would like to have more room to grow from performing successful skill checks. The developer does let you know that you will die 2-3 times per chapter so you can’t hate honesty. The game has potential if it opens doors to free players (by moving an ad after every chapter/death?) and giving you a little more backstory on what your doing