The Path of Light

I'd say this is really a 2 star book. I feel bad saying it because I even got the second installment and that was also 2 star. I can see what the writer was going for and its an ok story. Basically you are a Cleric/Priest but really the story is lack luster most of the time, shallow is the word for it in almost every respect. Sometimes settings don't make sense and there are some grammar and spelling issues that make you give up and move on. The upside is that the second part you pay for is a bit better and that's why it got 2 stars.

The writing is very good, however the story does not appeal to me personally. I played the game and it was good enough to buy the second part, however it is on the short side and very Limited in regards to replay value.

The story is fun but there are many typos and some errors (can't get favor from dotted mushrooms) and some awkward phrasing makes it feel like it was written by a non-native English speaker or a VERY young writer (no offense). Reading it I just wanted to edit the whole thing for you. I own every hosted and choice of game because I love the genre but this one was hard to finish and I had to quit it to review it.

I am a huge fan of Choice of Games and Hosted Games and I have to say I didn't care for this one at all!

The game has character name changes, and no matter what you do you can't use the rag doll. Please fix soon.

Pretty fun game but lots of glitches. Names for characters aren't the same as what you make them, and I can't defeat the second demon boss without the rag doll from Clarissa, but I received the rag doll. Also they're are other minor errors such as typos, please fix

I haven't finished this yet but it really puts me out of the mood when every few pages i have to stop and think who is Jacob? Who is untima?

One of my favorite text based adventure games

This was poorly written and I couldn't find entertainment in this game. I kept playing only to hope it would get better and eventually I just gave up. Also the names you picked in the beginning switched to other names as the story progressed.