A lot of things to improve
First thing that stands out to me is the Art. And wow did LAM did a good job in it. Music is also top notch. I really enjoyed this game while music is on. But where it fails is on QoL. Like controls and mechanics as such. Controls feels sluggish, maybe a fixed control point as an option would be great. Interactions with items in the game such as the chest or orbs is a bit sluggish as well. Battle is also sluggish, maybe a rethink on the battle system would be needed. Translations is a bit of a hit and miss. But I think all of this is fixable, just need to put in the time to optimize things. I really think this game has the potential. Once all of that is fixed.