Elemental Saga: The Awakening

could use some touch up with the grammar and spelling tho

have rooms for some touch ups 👌

What can I say the story is great

Best story that I’ve ever read😍🥰

It was hard to enjoy reading.

I greatly enjoyed the story. I wish there were more choices in the story...maybe add in a feature where you can go back and change a decision without having to restart the whole story and also show a few pictures of the characters and their powers. Please hurry with the next part....that cliffhanger at the end had me replaying the story multiple times.

If I were to write “thsi gmea is grtae” I would be ashamed. They writers really should have looked over their (notice it is I after E) work even once, they would have caught hundreds of simple mistakes.

Will there be a part 2 or like a continuation?

Though the typos and grammatical errors were somewhat distracting, I thoroughly enjoyed the story

This story is interesting and I love the way it flows. Yes, there are some editing and grammar issues but nothing major. It’s a nice, easy read!!