Lucid Lenses

I had high expectations for this game but I could barely get pasted the first chapter. The storyline is cute and interesting but I just don’t think it’s completely finished. This game definitely needs to be worked on a lot more, the art style is also cute, I guess. Disappointed.

This game has…potential. Unfortunately, the characters and storyline just don’t cut it. First of all, the English just isn’t great. There are a lot of major grammatical and spelling errors. The way the characters speak to each other doesn’t flow well at all and It’s just not realistic. People don’t talk that way. The characters, other than Emily, just aren’t very likable either. They’re all basically just jerks. I get that there’s “baggage” or whatever (well not in the bird’s case, she’s just rude for the sake of being rude. What’s even the point of her?) but there’s no attempt to give them heart at all. The guy is just…rude. And she falls in love with him anyway somehow. We don’t get to see how they fall in love. One day he corrects her homework and then suddenly they’re a couple and he just stays rude. It’s a very unbelievable and odd story. The end is very abrupt and anticlimactic. The gameplay is ok. It’s incredibly simple, but I think it’s meant to be. I guess it’s supposed to be relaxing. Other than that, there were no bugs, the music is nice, and the animation is good. So there is potential there. Rewrite the script with an English proofreader and editor and you’ll have something.