Zombien

Ok

Story is fun so far, but the editing (capitalization, punctuation, sentence flow) was so problematic that I can’t continue with it. A good editorial pass would make this game shine.

Love the reference to zombie exodus in the first chapter with the cathedral and Tom and mindy haha!

Loved it. Kinda short but still amazing. I am confused tho. How is Rachel pregnant? I didn’t go near her.

I’m Currently half way though the story and my caricature name is Benjamin Smith and its been great so far with great story and caricatures! I Definitely recommend you downloading this app, there are a few grammar errors though but does not change the story at all.

I like the book for the most part but as others said the grammar and spelling was displeasing. I often caught words misspelt, enough to actually bother me. The only other complaint I had was my ending wasn't all that good. Unlike other authors the ending wasn't really that great.

i really liked the story, the characters, and the options presented. however, there were so many errors in pronouns. my male love interest was frequently referred to as she/her. parts that were supposed to be about him switched from him to sarah. ex. jacob was in your bed, you were happy about it. as you held her closer, you were so glad you'd met sarah. i'd give it four or five stars otherwise. most games i tend to ignore little typos and such, but there were SO many that it was extremely distracting. however, i do think the game is worth the money. it's unique and i enjoyed it:)

SPOILER: ABSOLUTELY loved the references to zombie exodus. I'm absolutely thrilled to see a lot of the characters before they got together

I loved the story line even though I didn't have the money to spend on getting the full story still had a great story and good grammar but I do wish this game was free to play the full story instead of just part of it

This story is extremely well written and intriguing. I cannot recommend it enough, other than the fact that you have to pay for the third chapter. Even if you do not want to play, you should still read it because it's THAT good.